Instruct: Classify a given review into positive or negative sentiment.
Query: 1st published rough draft in history of publishing?

This story needs massive amounts of editing for basics like plot continuity, characterization,dialogue, etc. You name it -- it needs fixin'. Take it off the market, fix it up -- clarify the premise; make the characters and plot believable; construct some form of internal logic for the plot and for the heroine's propensity for cursing a blue streak. Then, and only then, put it back on the market. It has the potential to be an exciting story, but it's still too raw, too amateurish. In spite of the weakness of this story, I will probably look into other works by this author.