Instruct: Classify an Amazon review into positive or negative sentiment.
Query: Grammar errors in a National Book Award Title?

Maybe I'm just a permanent English teacher, but the plethora of comma splices and run-on sentences just left me cold. I agree with the reviewer who criticized the way the narrative jumps around in seemingly random fashion; there is no depth to the story. However, even beyond that, when I read a novel, I'm looking for good writing. I didn't find that here.